https://youtu.be/fE8_A_FYR_A
Reflection: Everyone loved the way I made the video, they said that the camera was very still and that it made me remain the main focus throughout. I did the video on a limb, but people still said it looked pretty professional- which was defintely surprised me. Another thing that surprised me was that a commenter said I "had a lot of confidence", which was not something I was expecting because I didn't feel too confident.
What I changed: One commenter gave me a great idea, that the glue could be sold to dancers who would then fix their own shoes, so I decided to add it into my pitch. Someone also said that they were criticized for propping up their camera, but that for me it seemed to work pretty well, but this time around I still tried to get a better angle for the video. By getting a closer view of my face, I feel like the interview was much more personal. This time around I was more nervous and messed up a few times, but I tried to power through it.
Hey cassidy, good work on the pitch. You were extremely professional, spoke clear, and I knew exactly what you were pitching by the end of the video. Honestly, this was one of the best pitches I've seen thus far. Here's the link to my personal blog: http://flgatorblogging.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-no3.html
ReplyDeleteHi Cassidy,
ReplyDeleteI thought your pitch was really great! You can tell that you know what you are talking about and that you are passionate about it. The camera and sound were both good too, that’s something I am having trouble with. I think that your idea is great and that it has a lot of potential to be very successful. My idea is to start an immersion preschool. If you would like to check out my elevator pitch number 3 you can watch it here: http://emmastetterent3003.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-no-3.html
Thanks for sharing!
Hi Cassidy!
ReplyDeleteI thought you did a really great job on your pitch! I thought you were very dynamic and you caught my attention the whole time. I think your idea has a lot of potential, as I have no yet heard something like what you are suggesting yet on the market. Overall, great job! Here is the link to my Elevator No. 3 Pitch if you want to check it out: http://lbritthoff.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-no-3.html